First written Revision
《朝中措》
鷦金梳作暗香英，香到鏡中停。
偶影欄前欲並，一絲朱髮先縈。
唇邊鳳語，挹來便作，銀磬微鳴。
字底分明芒刺，唇間猶護餘聲。
To the tune of Chaozhongcuo
Feather-gold combed into a blossom of hidden scent; the scent reaches the mirror and stops.
With only a shadow for company at the railing, longing to stand side by side; one strand of red hair entwines first.
Phoenix words at the lips: once drawn in, they become the faint ringing of a silver chime-stone.
Beneath the words, the thorns are clear; between the lips, the lingering sound is sheltered still.