First written Revision
《滿庭芳 · 遙思楚潭》
風佩初停,雨梳朝蕣,尺書先識眉彎。
一聲低喚,驚散夢中弦。
墨跡新添氣息,微微顫、欲出行間。
相逢處,餘溫未定,人近楚天寬。
辭顏。名已熟,臨唇卻緩,舌底生瀾。
把千里關山,盡斂襟前。
幾月光陰忽薄,回眸際、指過眉山。
從頭認,詩還半闋,雙影壓箋邊。
To the tune of Mantingfang · Thinking of Chutan from afar
The wind’s pendants have just stilled; rain combs the morning hibiscus; letters knew the arch of the brows first.
One low call scatters the dream’s strings.
Fresh breath enters the ink-traces; faintly trembling, they are about to emerge from between the lines.
At our meeting, the lingering warmth has yet to settle; with you near, the sky of Chu grows wide.
Ciyan. A familiar name, yet slow upon the lips; waves rise beneath the tongue.
A thousand li of mountains and passes, all gathered at the breast.
Months of time grow suddenly thin; in a backward glance, a finger passes over the mountain of a brow.
To know you again, from the beginning; the poem still half-written, two shadows press on the edge of the page.