Hanpu Li 李函璞

To the tune of Manjianghong · Hoping to hold you back, knowing how it must go

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Sewn version

First written 2022 Revision

《滿江紅 · 望沮攔約當應是》

舊隙才縫,春風又、殷勤留客。 門欲掩、卻翻簾影,放春偷入。 瘦損腰圍衣尚窄,暗痕都向肌膚積。 算歸來、猶有舊針留,縫新隙。 燈未冷,人已易。門不閉,風偏急。 更何須揀擇,過門皆璧。 初景寒柯違業識,豐城元禮宜同席。 看收場、針腳又周全,無痕跡。

To the tune of Manjianghong · Hoping to hold you back, knowing how it must go

The old split barely sewn, spring wind again presses a guest to stay. The door would close; the curtain’s shadow turns instead, letting spring slip in. The waist has grown thin, yet the garment is still tight; hidden marks all gather on the skin. On the return, I reckon, the old needle will still be there, to sew the new split. The lamp has not cooled; already someone else. The door stays open; the wind grows urgent. Why bother choosing? Everyone through the door is jade. First light and the cold branch run counter in karmic consciousness; Fengcheng and Yuanli ought to sit together. See how it ends: the stitching whole again, no trace.

Second rewriting

First written 2022 Revision

《滿江紅 · 望沮攔約當應是 · 又稿》

漏盡鐘回,催曉處、餘聲仍塞。 門欲掩、劣衿將去,又迎嘉客。 舊事還從新曆出,階前風雨渾成笛。 算韶光、只在一聲中,塵先積。 空空雪,留故色。光易轉,痕難拭。 縱衣冠屢換,總稱圭璧。 初景寒柯違業識,豐城元禮宜同席。 曉山塗,晝影祭寒華,猶無息。

To the tune of Manjianghong · Hoping to hold you back, knowing how it must go — another version

The water-clock runs out; the bell returns. Where it urges dawn, its lingering sound is still obstructed. The door would close; the shabby collar is about to leave, yet another fine guest is welcomed. Old events come out of the new calendar again; before the steps, wind and rain turn wholly to flute-song. All that fair time, within a single sound—and dust has gathered first. Empty, empty snow keeps the old colour. Light turns easily; the trace is hard to wipe away. However often robes and caps are changed, all are called precious jade. First light and the cold branch run counter in karmic consciousness; Fengcheng and Yuanli ought to sit together. Dawn’s mountain is clogged; daylight’s shadow makes offerings to cold bloom, still without cease.