First written
《鷓鴣天 · 連夕燈下試筆,未竟》
幾夕簾前共剪燈,平生話到又三更。
從頭説盡還存半,且任宵深硯自凝。
言漸杳,露初零。獨餘一語未分明。
頻頻蘸得毫端黑,墨至濃時偏不成。
To the tune of Zhegutian · Several evenings at the lamp, trying to write; unfinished
Some nights, before the curtain, we trimmed the lamp together;
a whole life talked through, and again it was the third watch.
Told from the beginning, told to the end — half of it still there.
Let the night go deep; let the ink congeal in the inkstone by itself.
The words thin out. The dew begins to fall.
One phrase alone is left, and it will not come clear.
Again and again the brush-tip comes up black;
when the ink is thickest, it will not make the words.